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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 #27 [Line]

by Callum Nguyễn
January 28, 2023
in IELTS, IELTS Writing
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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. [ĐỀ THI NGÀY 7/1/2023 PAPER-BASED]

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The given graph illustrates the number of overseas travellers who visited three different attractions in a European country from 1987 to 2007. It is noticeable that the number of tourists visiting all the areas witnessed an upward trend over the given period.

In 1987, the coast attracted the most overseas visitors, with 40 thousand while the converse held true for the lakes, with only 10 thousand. Over the next two decades, the number of overseas tourists opting for the lakes rose gradually to approximately 35 thousand. Similarly, there was a dramatic jump in the number of visitors to the lakes to about 75 thousand, followed by a drop to 50 thousand in 2007.

At the beginning of the period, 20 thousand tourists from other countries visited the mountains. The mentioned attractions welcomed 30 thousand visitors in 1997 and the figure remained relatively stable until 2002. At the end of the period, the number of tourists to the mountains reached the highest point of 35 thousand.

( 165 WORDS)

Overall, a high scoring answer selects and compares the main features. Try to shorten the overview into one sentence. You don’t need too much detail here. For example…

““Overall, there was an increase in the number of tourists in all three categories over the period of twenty years.”

Additionally, be careful when reporting the data – it must be accurate.

TASK ACHIEVEMENT:  7

COHERENCE & COHESION: 8

LEXICAL RESOURCES : 7

GRAMMATICAL RANGE & ACCURACY : 8

The report was written by Callum Nguyen and the feedback was given by Mr. Peter Wright, an ex-examiner with 25+ years of experience. Visit his blog at Total – IELTS 

Bài mẫu được viết bởi Callum Nguyen và được đánh giá/cho điểm bởi thầy Peter Wright, cựu giám khảo IELTS với 25 năm kinh nghiệm với BC và IDP. Ghé thăm blog của thầy tại Total – IELTS 

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