Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 #29 [Pie]

The provided charts illustrate the proportion of world forest and timber in five different continents.
It is noticeable that Africa is the region with the highest percentage of forest while the opposite is true for Asia. Also, the figure for timber in North America is higher than those for the other areas.
Regarding the distribution of forest, the figure for Africa was highest, at 27%, which is almost twice as high as that for Asia. Meanwhile, North America makes up a quarter of world forest, compared to 18% for Europe. 16% of world forest belongs to the continent of South America.
As for timber in each region, North America has the highest percentage of timber, at 30%, followed by South America, at 23%. The figure for Europe stands at 20%, which is higher than that for Asia by 2%. The lowest proportion of timber belongs to Africa, at only 9%.

(150 words)

Task Achievement: 8 – Covers the requirements of the task and even though there is not a lot of data to work with, the key features are all presented.

Cohesion & Coherence: 8 – Information organized with clear structure and progression. A range of cohesive devices used.

Lexical Resource: 7 – Sufficient range and clear awareness of formal style.

Grammar: 7 – Some complex sentences and no mistakes. Good control of grammar.

The report was written by Callum Nguyen and the feedback was given by Mr. Peter Wright, an ex-examiner with 25+ years of experience. Visit his blog at Total – IELTS 

Bài mẫu được viết bởi Callum Nguyen và được đánh giá/cho điểm bởi thầy Peter Wright, cựu giám khảo IELTS với 25 năm kinh nghiệm với BC và IDP. Ghé thăm blog của thầy tại Total – IELTS 

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