Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 #26 [Process]

Bài mẫu được viết bởi Callum Nguyen và được đánh giá/cho điểm bởi thầy Peter Wright, cựu giám khảo IELTS với 25 năm kinh nghiệm với BC và IDP. Ghé thăm blog của thầy tại Total – IELTS

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. [ĐỀ PAPER-BASED 19-01-2023]

The provided diagram illustrates the process of producing potable water from rainwater in an Australian town. Overall, the production of drinking water involves five main steps, beginning with the collection of rainwater and ending with the distribution of purified water to families.

At the beginning of the process, rainwater is channeled to the pipe system built under the roofs through the drains. In the subsequent step, a water filter is used to get rid of the dirt and filth. Once the unwanted pollutants are eliminated, the water is moved into a huge container for the purpose of storing.

The process continues with the stored water being channeled to another rectangular container where it is treated with chemicals. During the process, the rainwater is transformed into drinkable water. Finally, the clean water produced from the previous stage is pumped into the water system of residents’ houses to be used.

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Overall, clear structure and selection and reporting of main features. Only state the facts and not speculation. No grammar mistakes and good linking words

TASK ACHIEVEMENT: 7

COHERENCE & COHESION: 8

LEXICAL RESOURCES : 8

GRAMMATICAL RANGE & ACCURACY : 8

The report was written by Callum Nguyen and the feedback was given by Mr. Peter Wright, an ex-examiner with 25+ years of experience. Visit his blog at Total – IELTS